Feedback For My Peers



Below are a few of the blogs of my classmates in COMM140 and the feedback that i have given them on those blogs.
The feedback will be posted on each of their blogs.



Feedback to ALICIA SARIC 

https://aliciaacu140.blogspot.co.id/p/blog-1.html


 Feedback:
Hi Alicia
Regarding to the driving question, Do Natives Exist? You have shown to have a great understanding of the topic and have answered the question well. I like how you have addressed real life examples of the business world and how being a digital native can excel you in a career. You have provided good definitions for both natives and immigrants but maybe you could show examples of how an immigrant is affected in the work place or day to day life, just like what you have done with digital natives. Something that could be addressed is how some teachers (being immigrants) must adapt to the digital native students in the classroom. Though I like what image you have used to assist your reflective blog.

Overall it was written very well and provided relevant and direct knowledge to the topic. It will help others understand what digital native/immigrants are and why they are labelled in such ways.



Feedback to TARA WILLIAMS


Feedback:
Hey Tara
You have answered the driving question with a solid understanding on the topic. Overall the blog is written well, though there are some areas that need to be looked over, such as the first sentence in paragraph two. I like how you have addressed both of the positives and negatives to online games and show a good understanding of what the importance is in having games within the classroom.  The data that you have referenced from Prensky is a very helpful tool when providing evidence to your answer. Maybe something that could be addressed are real life examples of how these games can help individual needs of children say if they are lacking in a certain area. 


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